Group Presentation

Hey everyone.

How did you feel the group presentation went?
What do we need to improve?
And when do we wanna do this?

My opinion was that we did ok, I think we hit most of the points but there were definately some areas to improve, and some areas to expand on which they really liked (such as Floriane's patterns and materials on site)

The things that I picked up from the feed back, and from speaking to Ian after, (he is writing up our groups crit) are:

-Likes florianes patterns of the site,
-Dislike cliche images (but this is easy to change) I think the idea is great but we need to find a better way to show it.
-Representing the data found. (we have loads of information but need to find ways to make them more visual and come to some conclusions about the information we have found)
-Similarly with the future developments they want us to really know them and critique them, and give our opinions on them) If we feel they fit with the site or not, ect!

More specifcally for the first point, I think we could expand this by, maybe photo montaging the images to scale onto a site map, this is want I want to start with today, I am going to go to site, do another walk, and photograph similar things, and note down where they are found, so that I can put together this photo montage, perhaps even a larger scale model, and montage the photos on to this and show our route some how!
So this is were I will start today..

I intend to go to site today, and do some more work, so if anyone wants to join me then thats great, just give me a text or a call!

These are just what i have have picked up on, im sure there were other points.
I hope you dont think im being pushy or anything, not my intention, just wanna get the most out of this year and im sure you do too,
I was thinking it is probably easyiest to chat about this on the blog rather than by email so I will post all this up there too!


Sorry its alot of writing!
Thanks jess